This is actually your more well-made pages, now isn't it? :] It's a bit better than the rest in terms of design, organization, cleanliness, character screen time... okay, maybe I'm not so much the critic but, ah well. :]
...Apart from Mo,Arc, and Caed who're the rest of the people commenting? I don't know who's who.
Ah, by the way, even though my brothers are homophobes they said it was well made.
And apparently, my little bro was visiting daily to see updates...until I told him, "Dude, they're gay. Yes, all of them are...well, except for one. Those are NOT girls. Well, guys can wear skirts too, you know.There's no law against it. You're talking about gay MARRIAGES! And besides, it's legal now in California. Fine, don't go there! We have relatives there, you know. That person lives in California, yes. No, I don't think he's gay. Owning gay bars does not make you gay.I don't know what makes you gay. Besides, you're not gay. You're just QUEER."
(My side of the conversation. You can tell what he said.)
